Previously…
– Everyone gathered for the grand opening of Billâs on the Pier.
– Sarah was irate when Zane showed up as Toriâs date, even though she paid him the money he was blackmailing her for.
–Â Kathleen became insecure after Jimmy and Danielle performed a song together and ran out of the restaurant.
– Rosie was stunned to recognize one of the busboys, Jesse, from her past.
The sights, sounds, and delicious smells of the restaurantâs grand opening swirl all around Rosie Jimenez as she walks toward the back hallway, where the ladiesâ room is located. When she passes the swinging doors that lead into the kitchen, however, she stops and glances through them. Her boyfriend is visible through one of the small window panes, and Rosieâs face lights up as she watches him work. She is about to move out of the way when one of the doors swings open.
âComing through!â a busboy calls as he carries a pitcher of water out of the kitchen.
âSorry,â Rosie says, but she stops dead before she can even finish the word fully. The busboy freezes, too, as their stares lock upon one another.
âJimenez? The hell are you doing here?â he asks in disbelief.
Rosie feels panic rising inside her, but she forces herself to shift into professional mode — a mode in which fear is simply not an option. âI could ask you the same thing, Jesse.”
âI work here. Thatâs not a crime. So donât think about going all KBPD on me.â He smirks, as Rosieâs nerves tingle. âYeah, I know you became a cop. Never saw that one coming.”
She glances around nervously. âHow did you know that?”
âYou hear things.”
âDo you still talk to–â But she cuts herself off before the question is out, because she sees Travis emerging from the kitchen.
âHey,â he says as he sidles up beside Rosie. âWhatâs up, Jesse? You guys know each other?”
—–
âThis is never gonna work, Jimmy. Itâs time we both admitted that.”
Out on the pier, Kathleen Bundy stares sadly at her date, who is slack-jawed with confusion.
âWhat are you talking about?â Jimmy Trask asks as he moves closer to her.
âYou and me — this has been fun, but we both know it canât last.”
âYouâre talking crazy. Everything was fine a few minutes ago. Now you, what? Wanna break up?”
âI donât want to!â Emotion spills out of her voice as the declaration tears out of her. âBut I saw you in there, with Danielle, and⌔
Jimmyâs face screws up. âDanielle? What does she have to do with this?”
âYou and her — you just make sense together. You have a kid together. And the way you perform together⌔
âDanielle and I havenât had a thing in more than 20 years! Where in tarnation is this coming from?”
Kathleen folds her arms across the front of her magenta dress; the autumn cold is insisting on making its presence known.
âIâm just some lunchlady from Tacoma,â she finally says. âI donât do fancy things. I canât sing or play a guitar or dance, or⌔
âYou really think those are the reasons Iâd be with someone?â Jimmy pushes through the invisible forcefield that she has put up between them and takes her hands. âDo you remember what you said to me back when we met at the chili cookoff?”
With big, sad eyes, she looks up at him.
âYou said, âIâm a wild lady, and I like wild things,ââ he tells her. âAnd if that isnât the truth, I donât know what the hell is. You are the life of every party, Kath. You bring this, this joy, thatâs completely infectious. You go to work every day, and you spruce up every one of those kidsâ lives. You make the whole damn world brighter.”
Kathleen gazes out to the dark, shimmering surface of the bay as she listens to him.
âBut Danielle, and Claire, these women youâve been with,â she says, âtheyâre so skinny and pretty and classy–”
âThis is not about them. Itâs about you and me. And I think youâre about the prettiest thing Iâve ever seen.”
âYou donât mean that.”
âI do! Itâs been a long, long time since I felt like this about anyone, and you know what? It hurts me to hear you putting yourself down like that.”
Kathleen shakes her head. âI just donât wanna get all caught up in this and then get the rug pulled from under me. Life has had this way of sneakinâ up on me right when I get comfortable⌔
âThen letâs get comfortable together.”
âEasier said than done.”
âWhyâs that?â He thinks for a split-second before dropping down to one knee.
Kathleen gasps loudly. âJimmy, what are you doing?”
âIâm showing you how much I care.â
âYouâre crazy!”
âCrazy for you, baby.â He slides a bulky ring off his right hand. âMy old high school ring is gonna have to do for now. Kathleen Bundy, would you do me the pleasure — no, the downright honor — of being my wife?”
She covers her mouth in shock.
âYou gonna leave me hanging?â he asks, grinning. âThis dock isnât exactly soft.”
âJimmyâŚâ A laugh and a sob somehow escape her throat at the same time. âOf course I will!”
He slides the ring onto her left hand and then scrambles back to his feet. âWeâre getting married!â He turns to the bay and shouts into the night, âYâall hear that? Weâre getting married!â And then he kisses his fiancĂŠe long and hard to prove how much he means it.
—–
As the waitstaff clears the salads and brings out the next course — a sampler containing cups of the clam chowder and chili — Spencer Ragan excuses himself from his table and maneuvers his wheelchair over to where his cousin and her boyfriend are seated.
âYou must be Zane,â he says as he shakes the other manâs hand. âIâm guessing Tori told you⌔
âAbout the memory thing? Yeah. Iâm glad to hear that youâre getting better,â Zane Tanaka says.
âYou look really good,â Tori Gray adds. âHowâs physical therapy?”
âI still feel like shit,â Spencer says. He looks past them, toward Landon Esco, who seems anything but thrilled to see Spencer as he finishes his salad in very deliberate silence.
Spencer diverts his gaze and addresses Tori and Zane again:Â âI just want to be back to normal. That therapist Tim hired is a drill sergeant when weâre working.”
âReally?â Tori says. âShe seems kind of, I donât know, meek.”
âThatâs how she tricks you. I mean, I guess itâs good for me, but the work sucks. And I still canât walk. I canât even imagine getting back to living on my own right now — not that I can remember where I live.”
Tori sets down her water glass. âYour house is really cool. You donât remember it at all?”
He shakes his head. âNot even a little. HonestlyâŚâ He leans forward in the wheelchair and lowers his voice. âThereâs stuff that I know I have there, but I canât ask Tim to go get it because I donât have a clue where it is. He went and got some clothes and stuff, but still.”
âLike what?â Tori asks. âI can go pick stuff up for you.”
âLikeâŚâ Spencer casts a quick glance in Landonâs direction. âMy weed and pipe. Do you know how nice it would be to just chill out at night? I am so bored.”
âTry and give me some clues about where it could be, and Iâll go over to the house and pick up whatever you need,â his cousin tells him.
They clam up as Helen Chase approaches their table.
âI thought Iâd come over and say hello while we wait for the next course,â the older woman says. âZane, welcome back! Tori, you must be delighted to have him here.”
Tori beams brightly as she leans against Zane. âI am.”
âGood to see you, Mrs. Chase,â Zane says.
âHi, Mrs. Chase,â Landon chimes in.
âOh, Landon! Hello! Itâs been so long. Howâs your new apartment?”
Landon quickly finishes chewing a large bite of his salad. âItâs good. Thinking about getting a lava lamp, but I have to convince Travis itâs a good idea.”
âItâs not a good idea,â Tori says with a laugh.
âOh, I donât know,â Helen says. âIt could be kind of⌠whatâs the word⌠groovy?”
âSee?â Landon says, setting down his fork declaratively. âThis lady knows what sheâs talking about!”
—–
At a nearby table, Sophie Fisher busies herself with an iPad, while the teenagers talk amongst themselves and wait for the next course.
âYou must practice, like, nonstop,â Marcus Gray is saying to Bree Halston.
âUsually six days a week,â she says, âbetween on-ice and off-ice training.”
âThatâs intense. Itâs really impressive.”
On the other side of the table, Caleb Taylor rolls his eyes at Marcusâs flattery.
Bree shrugs bashfully. âItâs just something I love doing. But Iâm sure you get it. You play football, donât you?”
âIâm only the kicker,â Marcus says. âMy dadâs the coach, so he sort of makes me play.”
âYou donât like it?”
âItâs fine.”
âOh, man, itâs awesome,â Caleb cuts in. âFootball season is the best. Iâm gonna be starting quarterback for the JV team next year.”
âThatâs great, Caleb,â Bree says sweetly.
âThat isnât, like, guaranteed,â Christian Taylor says.
Caleb turns sharply to his twin. âShut up.”
âBree got first place at Regionals last month,â Sophie announces, without looking up from her tablet.
âI watched some of the video of your program when your dad was showing it to Mom,â Christian says. âYou were really good.”
âThanks.â Bree smiles as her cheeks grow rosier. âSectionals is next week in Spokane. The field is going to be a lot harder than Regionals was.”
âI bet youâre gonna go awesome,â Marcus says.
âHey,â Caleb interrupts, pointing to a waiter refilling wine glasses at the next table. âWhat do you think the odds are that we can score some booze?”
âIâm telling!â Sophie declares, though she still doesnât look up from her reading.
Caleb groans. âThereâs nothing to tell. I was joking.â Then, to Christian, he mouths, âI wasnât joking.”
âI feel like we shouldnât push our luck tonight,â Christian says. âI donât want to get in trouble.”
âMe, neither,â Bree says, and Marcus nods dutifully beside her.
âFine,â Caleb says, âbut they really oversold this thing when they said it was gonna be a party.”
—–
Near the kitchen, Rosie sees Jesseâs mouth start to open, and her heart rate spikes.
âI was just asking if he could refill the waters at our table,â she blurts out. âI think we got missed in the last round. And everyoneâs drinking, so⌔
Jesse throws her a sideways glance.
âIâm gonna go take care of that,â he says before heading off with the pitcher of water.
âAre you okay?â Travis asks Rosie. âYou seem jumpy.”
âMe? Iâm fine.â Her heart keeps thudding against the inside of her chest. âThe salads were great. I was just about to go use the ladiesâ room. Landon showed up, by the way. You should go say hi.”
Travis cocks an eyebrow as his girlfriend rambles. âYou sure youâre okay?”
âBelieve me, Iâm more than okay.â Eager to get to the ladiesâ room so that she can gather herself, she plants a quick kiss on his lips. âGo see Landon. Iâll be right over.”
âOkay.”
She dips into the hallway and through the door into the pristine, new restroom. Once she is locked inside a stall, she lets out the breath that she has been holding in ever since she saw Jesseâs face emerge from the kitchen. She knows that there is one thing that she has to do, as much as she would rather not: she needs to find a way to talk to Jesse alone.
—–
Tim Fisher thanks the waitress as she clears the empty salad plates from Table Three. Beside him, Sonja Kahele quietly sips a glass of pinot grigio.
âAre you having a nice time?â Tim asks.
Sonja turns. âI am. Your family and friends throw such nice parties. Itâs justâŚâ She scans the room, with its wood-paneled walls, beautiful floral arrangements, and slew of activity. âA little overwhelming. I usually donât go out like this.”
âItâs good to cut loose every now and then.”
âYeah. It is. Youâve all done such a nice job with this event tonight. It sounds like your father would have a lot to be proud of.”
âI hope so,â Tim says wistfully.
She places her wine glass back on the table. âYou really miss him, donât you?”
âMore than you can imagine. One day, he was here and so alive, and the nextâŚâ He sighs. âIâm sure youâve seen the news about what happened.”
Sonja purses her lips. âI didnât mean to pry. But yes, I Googled your family before I accepted the job. Losing your father and your brother that way must have been so hard.”
âItâs been a rough few years. And then almost losing Spencer⌔
âSpencer is going to be just fine,â she says. âHeâs getting better every day. Even if heâs a little impatient.”
âA little?”
âOkay, maybe a lot. But heâs improving.â She hesitates before continuing. âI hope Iâm not overstepping my bounds here — and please, if I am, tell me to be quiet — but thereâs something Iâve been wondering about. The news articles all said Spencer was Philip Raganâs brother, but heâs also your son? And Claireâs? Iâve been confused.”
âItâs a long, complicated, really messed-up story.â He looks around the restaurant, noticing that Spencer is occupied with Tori, as he gathers his thoughts. âThe short version is that Claireâs father, James, was a maniac, and right after Spencer was born, James kidnapped him.”
âOh my gosh!”
âWhen we got him back, well⌠we actually got a different baby. James kept our biological son to raise with his wife, who was also Philipâs mother. We didnât find out the truth until a few years ago.”
âSo Travis is the son you raised,â she says, putting the pieces together out loud.
âRight. Itâs been a tough road with Spencer. Loretta was the only parent he ever knew, and when the truth came out, he wasnât exactly keen on trusting us. In some ways, his accident has been a way of starting fresh. I hate that it happened to him, but his attitude since he found out about the things Philip did has beenâŚâ He shrugs, searching for words. âItâs like he finally is willing to accept us as his family — and not just accept us, but really make it work.”
She offers a kind smile in response. âThatâs great. And what about this⌠Loretta woman? Do they have contact?”
âFrom time to time, I think. Or they did before his accident. Sheâs in prison.”
âPrison!”
âShe did a lot of very bad things,â Tim says. âSpencer didnât want to believe any of that at first, either, but she hasnât even bothered denying any of it. So his entire world has really been rocked.”
Sonja is quiet for a long moment before she says, âIt definitely sounds like it.”
Tim snaps out of his thoughts and turns to watch her. She seems preoccupied, lost in her own musings.
âIs everything okay?â
âYeah. Yeah, everythingâs fine.â She reaches for her wine again. âJust processing everything youâve said, thatâs all. Itâs a lot. But Iâm glad you feel comfortable opening up to me.”
âYou make it easy,â Tim says. âI can see why youâre so good at your job.”
—–
Travis is headed to check in with his roommate when he spots Kathleen and Jimmy reentering the restaurant.
âOh, Trav!â Kathleen says, waving. âCâmon over here.”
âWhatâs up?â Travis asks as he joins them.
âJimmy and I have something to tell you,â she says. âSomething exciting.”
Travis scans their faces. âYeahâŚ?”
âGo on,â Jimmy says, beaming.
Kathleen draws a deep breath and then holds up her hand. Travis instantly sees the ring on her finger.
âIs that a class ring?â he asks.
âItâs temporary,â Jimmy explains. âA placeholder kinda thing. I had to think on my feet.”
âJimmy just asked me to marry him!â Kathleen says. âJust a minute ago.”
âWhoa.â Travis shakes his head in disbelief. âReally? Thatâs awesome. Congratulations, you guys.â He fumbles for a moment before pulling Kathleen into a hug; this sort of closeness is still new to both of them, but itâs becoming more natural as time goes by.
âHold on a second,â Landon says as he walks up to them. âAm I crazy, or did I just see some serious bling being waved around?”
Kathleen nods, unable to keep a smile from consuming her face. âSure did. Jimmy and I are getting married.”
âThat definitely calls for a hug!â Landon wastes not a second in embracing his friendâs mother.
âIâm gonna do right by your mom,â Jimmy says to Travis. âI promise.”
The men shake hands.
âI believe you,â Travis says. âYou guys are going to be really happy.”
âYou sure are. Now come here!â Landon says as he bombards Jimmy with a hug, too.
—–
âAunt Natalie,â Samantha Fisher says as she approaches the display case in the entryway, where Natalie and Bree are looking over the Fisher family photos and memorabilia from the old Fishermanâs Pier restaurant that used to stand on this very pier. âIâve been meaning to find a chance to come talk to you.”
âOh, itâs good to see you, Sam,â Natalie says, greeting her with a hug. âHow are you holding up?”
Samantha raises one shoulder uneasily. âFine, I guess.”
Natalie rubs her nieceâs arm in a comforting gesture. âIâm so sorry you have to go through all this with your mother. Jason and Alex told me.”
âI feel so bad that I missed Alex and Trevorâs wedding,â Samantha says. âIt looked so nice. I brought Trevor a gift and apologized, but I still feel guilty.”
âNo one blames you for sitting that out,â Natalie says. âAnd those guys would never hold it against you.”
âI hope theyâre having fun on their honeymoon.”
âAlex sent Jason some photos,â Bree offers. âIt looks really cool.”
âI think theyâre really living it up in Havana.â Natalie softens her tone as she changes the topic. âBut Sam, for real — you can always turn to us. Weâre always here for you. I know your mother is trash–”
âMom!â Bree says.
âWell, itâs true. I just want you to know that Bree and I are always here if you need us, and no one judges you because of the things Diane has done.”
âThanks.â Samantha gazes down at the floor as thoughts surge through her head. âWhatâs weird is that Iâve never really felt like I was a Bishop — Mom kind of kept me away from all of you. But now I feel like I donât belong with the Fishers, either.”
âDonât say that,â Bree tells her. âWe love you, Sam.”
âSheâs right. We do.â Natalie takes her niece by the shoulders, forcing her to make eye contact. âThe Fishers do, too. No one thinks any less of you or loves you less because of what Diane did. Do you hear me?”
Samantha feels her emotions swelling, but she manages to nod. âThank you.”
—–
When Zaneâs phone buzzes in his pocket, he immediately has a feeling what this might be about. Sure enough, he is right. With Tori and Spencer still chatting with Helen, and Landon having gone over to see Travis, he is easily able to slip away on the pretense of using the menâs room. Instead, he darts toward the restaurantâs front door.
âOver here,â a voice beckons him in a loud whisper.
He finds Sarah down at the end of the pier, far from the restaurantâs main entrance.
âDo you have a death wish?â he says as he approaches her.
âIs that a threat?”
âNo. But someoneâs going to see us talking.”
âAt this point, I have nothing to lose.â Nevertheless, she casts a wary glance toward the front of the restaurant. âI got you the money like you asked, and youâre still here. What else do I have to do?”
âWhy does it matter? I like Tori.”
Sarah is about to respond when she sees the front door opening. But then she sees her sister exit the building, look around, and head toward them. Mollyâs stilettos clatter against the wooden pier, echoing into the night.
âWhatâs going on out here?â she asks. âSarah, I told you to at least wait–”
âI donât want to wait,â Sarah says. âThis creep took a hundred thousand dollars and then went back on his word.”
âBecause I like your daughter,â Zane says. âWhatâs so bad about that?”
âOh, what mother hasnât dreamed of her daughter finding a nice guy who obstructs justice, blackmails people, and uses her as a pawn in a sick game?”
âIâm not using her.”
Sarah slaps her hand down on the railing. âDo you think Iâm an idiot? You got close to her so you could put the screws to me and get the money that I managed to avoid giving you the first time you blackmailed me–”
âYeah, maybe,â he admits. âBut Iâve grown to like her. A lot. I wouldnât have come back if I didnât. Not everything is about you, lady.”
Sarah lets out a growl and lunges at him. Molly inserts herself between them in time to keep her sister from actually attacking Zane.
âLet go of me,â Sarah orders.
âZane, go back inside,â Molly says. âThis is not the time or the place.”
He holds up his hands in a show of innocence. âI didnât want to come out here in the first place. Iâm going back to my date. You ladies have a great night.”
âUgh,â Sarah moans as she watches Zane retreat back up the pier and inside the restaurant. âIâm not letting him get away with this.”
Molly finally lets go of Sarah.
âWhat else are you supposed to do?â she asks. âMaybe we can get the money back–”
âIt isnât about the money,â Sarah says. âItâs about my daughter being lied to and manipulated by a common criminal. I know Iâve made some mistakes, but I wonât let him hurt her. I wonât — if itâs the last thing I do.”
—–
Spencer excuses himself to return to his own table. Helen slips into the chair that Zane just vacated, beside Tori.
âYou know, Victoria,â she says, âI heard you offer to go over to Spencerâs house and pick up some of his things.”
âYeah, I figure he must be going a little crazy,â Tori says.
âWell, if youâd like any help, Iâd be happy to go with you.”
âReally? Why?”
Helen waves a hand through the air, trying to seem as casual as possible. âIâm sure it will be difficult to see that house and think about what happened to him there. Iâm happy to go along for moral support.”
âYou donât have to do that–”
âOh, I insist! Maybe we can make an afternoon out of it. We can get manicures, and you can tell me all about that handsome beau of yours!”
âItâs a deal,â Tori says.
Helen grins. âWonderful.”
If thereâs something inside that house that will prove what Sabrina Gage did to Spencer, Helen thinks, Iâm going to find it.
—–
Spencer is returning to his table when he sees Travis wrapping up a chat with Tim, Sonja, Jason, and Natalie. He is about to redirect his wheelchair, but as Travis turns to head back toward the kitchen, the two young men find themselves face-to-face.
âHey,â Travis says. Awkwardness hangs over them like a raincloud forever on the verge of bursting. âUh, glad youâre doing okay. Everyone was pretty worried about you.”
âThanks.”
Spencer looks him over. His white chefâs coat has a few stains and splotches from his long day in the kitchen; Spencer has a few memories of Bill appearing in a very similar way. He can see Travis evaluating him, too, and he can almost see the gears turning in Travisâs head. Itâs as if each of them is sizing up the other, trying to figure out what life would be like if they hadnât been switched.
âEverything turned out great tonight,â Spencer says. âYou guys did an awesome job. I think Bill would be really happy.”
Travis blinks with surprise. âOh. Uh, thanks. Thatâs really nice.”
âItâs the truth. Anyway, Iâll let you get back–”
âYeah, I should– yeah. Hope you have fun tonight.”
With that, Travis peels off. Spencer wheels himself back to the table and realizes that Tim was observing the whole interaction from afar.
âEverything okay?â Tim asks his son.
Spencer nods. âActually, yeah.”
—–
While the soup course is being cleared, Rosie manages to catch Jesseâs eye.
âIâm gonna run to the ladiesâ room again,â she tells the others at her table, hoping that Jesse comprehends what she is saying.
A minute later, she is waiting in the back hallway when he appears.
âLook,â he says with annoyance. âI donât know nothing. I havenât heard from him in forever.”
Rosie narrows her eyes at him, unsure whether to trust him. âI thought youâd left town, too. Then I saw you at 322 a while back. I thought it might mean he was back, too.”
He bobs his head emphatically from side to side. âI know shit went sideways with you guys–”
âThatâs putting it lightly.”
â–but Iâm out of that whole thing now. No more drugs, no more shit like that. So if you think Iâm gonna help you find him or whatever–”
âI didnât say that.â She does her best to keep her voice even and measured, but it unnerves her that he can read her intentions so well.
âWell, youâre a cop now, and you know how I feel about cops. I donât trust âem.â
âI donât want any trouble, Jesse,â she says. âI just want to feel safe, okay? I became a cop so that I could protect people⌠the way I couldnât protect my own family.”
At the end of the hallway, Travis is walking back toward the kitchen when he spots Rosie. He is about to go over to her when he realizes who sheâs talking with — and how they serious they look.
âWhat the hell?â he mutters, ducking out of sight as his mind floods with more questions than ever about what his girlfriend is hiding from him.
END OF EPISODE 899
Should Travis confront Rosie about Jesse?
Is there anything Sarah can do about Zane?
Will Kathleen and Jimmy have a happy marriage?
Talk about all this and more in the comments below!
Hey,Michael !!!
Been looking forward to the follow up of 898. Here our my thoughts on 899.
I like the longer episodes and this did not disappoint
Rosie/Travis/Jesse : Finally we our getting some movement toward the reveal of Rosie’s past. I’m getting the sense she was part of the wrong crowd which eventually saw her parting ways with her family. With Jesse working with Travis it will probably not be long before Travis finds out the truth. In addition to finding out what was life like before Rosie became a cop.
Kathleen/Jimmy : Kathleen expressing her insecurities to Jimmy about not only how he still has this chemistry with Danielle. But Kathleen knows she isn’t skinny nor comes from middle or upper class like Danielle or Claire. Yet Jimmy assures her otherwise. I’m quite taken back about him proposing marriage to her. I guess because they’re minor characters it seemed their engagement came out of nowhere but I know you’re a talented enough writer to make it work whether they make it down the aisle or not. I did like Travis congratulating them and Landon being Landon being all happy for the pair of them had me laughing and smiling at the same time
The Teens : All of the teens really get on as a group and I like the characteristics you already gave to each of them. It seems that Marcus isn’t much into football although he might not want to disappoint his father. Caleb reminds me of his Uncle Josh a rebellious teen who might cause trouble between his more sensitive twin brother Christian and Bree whom both brothers seem to have feelings for. Cannot wait until they get a little more focus into next year.
Helen/Tori/Zane/Sarah/Molly/Spencer : LOL Helen thinks she is slick by accompanying Tori to Spencer’s place. I liked Landon’s interaction with that set as well. Tori is so young and dumb in love not knowing that her Zane is blackmailing her mother and Aunt behind her back. Whilst Sarah was about to kick his ass on the pier and trying to imagine Molly stepping between the two might be quite comical.
Samantha//Natalie/Bree : I liked Samantha interacting with her Aunt and cousin which they haven’t been in a lot of scenes together. I get that Sam doesn’t know her maternal grandparents as well or none at all unlike with her paternal ones. Natalie consoling her was great , it shows that she isn’t just the one dimensional vixen. Glad we found out about Alex and Trevor whereabouts. I totally can see them in Cuba partying it up and taking ton of selfies along the way.
You’re about to hit 900 episodes Congrats !!!
I’m finally starting to work on my website for my serial . So look out for my web series Town and Country online sometime next year.
Great Episode
Bre
Thank you for your comments, Bre! I can’t wait to see what you’ve come up with and to get sucked into Town and Country. Good luck with the website. I know what a challenge that can be!
The Travis/Rosie story is definitely hitting its stride now. You’re right that we’re going to learn quite a bit about Rosie’s life before she joined the KBPD — and it isn’t all squeaky-clean. This is going to be pretty frontburner going into the new year.
Since Jimmy and Kathleen are such minor characters, I’ve had most of their relationship develop offscreen. We’ve gotten ‘check-ins’ more than anything. It’s been over a year since they began dating, and they’re both middle-aged, so this felt like an appropriate time to move things forward for them. I just like that they add some fun flavor to the proceedings.
I’m kind of testing out the teens’ personalities and dynamics with these appearances, so I’m thrilled to hear you find them interesting and want to see more. It’s a little weird to have this whole new crop of characters, though Caleb and Christian are pretty familiar since their personalities are about what they were before the SORASing, and Bree has been a presence for a while, too. Marcus is definitely trying to balance his own interests with pleasing his father, which will become a bit of a throughline for him.
All the Zane stuff is going to escalate soon. In Sarah’s mind, this is now war. As smart as she can be, she does sometimes have an “act now, regret later” mentality, so she needs to watch it. Having Molly in the know is an interesting layer to me, because she and Sarah are so different.
Samantha is going to get to explore her Bishop side a little more in the coming months. If you recall, there was a tidbit in the 2017 preview implying an expansion for that family…
Thanks again!
Hey Michael, I caught up on the last couple of episodes over my coffee this morning! It’s not often that you do a big party, so it’s fun to see, almost, the entire cast at the restaurant for the grand opening.
Sarah is getting in over her head with Zane, that much is clear. Taking him outside and threatening him was classic; I just wonder what Zane’s endgame is – does he want more money? Or was he being sincere when he said he does actually have feelings for Tori? Of course, if/when the truth does come out, Tori will not only be upset with Sarah, but Zane as well because he’s not innocent in all of this. I like that you’re keeping Molly in the story too; the Sarah/Molly relationship is always fun!
I had almost forgotten about Rosie’s secret past with everything else going on; I’m curious to know who this Jesse fellow is and what Rosie did that she “failed” to protect her family. I also found it interesting reading Jesse’s reaction that she was a cop — it makes me believe that, maybe, Rosie did something criminal in the past. And, thank goodness, Travis saw them together again … hopefully he can get some answers from her!
Sonja is another mystery. She’s clearly playing the Fishers but asking Tim questions; I guess it makes it realistic since it is a confusing story to an outsider. Is it wrong that I hope Tim hooks up with her before realizing that she is a “bad guy”? haha he hasn’t been laid in a very long time!
Great couple of reads – keep up the great work! I can’t wait to see what you have planned for the big 9-0-0!
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Thanks for your comments and for catching up, Dallas!
These big parties really take it out of me. It’s so fun to get everyone in one place and mix up some dynamics, but they’re mentally taxing to write. You’re always having to move the camera around, figure out spots for different interactions to occur, make sure the ‘choreography’ doesn’t get mixed up, check in with everyone, etc. Between the wedding and this opening, I’ve had my fill for a bit! đ
Zane definitely has feelings for Tori, as we’ve seen in some private moments and will continue to see. This will become clearer as things go along, but he’s cocky enough to think he can have his cake and eat it, too. But Sarah has basically declared war now, and we know how Sarah gets when she digs in her heels on something.
Rosie’s past is going to be a big story from here on out. I hate that it’s had to take this long to blast off, but it felt like one of the easier things to put on ice for a bit. Now that Travis saw her with Jesse, things are going to blow up. One side effect I do like is that they feel established as a couple now, so the stakes are higher than if this had happened when they’d just begun seeing each other. But I’m ready to get moving!
Sonja’s motives are going to become much clearer very soon. I agree that it’s weird that she seems to be working for someone and yet asking these questions. Some of them were pretty leading, too. It makes you wonder what she’s really up to… And I hear you on Tim. Poor guy! It’s been a LONG while.
Thanks again!